WALT use precise nouns to add more detail to the reader.

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some Ice cream We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll and a soft golden toy. After that we went to the shop to buy some nikey clothes, I got two new items and a pair of shoes. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block. Lucky me!

Cyber Smart Consequences

Field Trip

Hello pupils today we went on a AWESOME! field trip and it is when you look into these goggles and then you see what ever you are in, You will need a phone and it fells like you are there, And the app is called Expeditions it is not out yet but I hope you like my presentation bye.

ToolKits

Hi Pupils yesterday we had a big day about Tool Kits it is when the the presenter is presenting about something like I movie or Blinging blogs and the other stuff and I have a presentation about tool kits that i'm going to show you.

Rugby World Cup 4 Sentence Recount

WALT recount an event in just 4 sentences.

Yesterday we wrote a recount about the rugby world cup, And guess what the All Blacks won!